NEOPETS ish teh bestest place eva. ^^ If u don't agree, too bad! xD
I shall have a few sections:
-Neopian Times
If I have a favorite story, comic, etc. it shall be noted here.
-Story Contest
My favorite stories (they'd probably be all my favs if I actually read them all xD)
from teh story contest. (PS: I'm trying to win an entry-wish me luck! ^^) Read the stories here: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml
-Neo Fanfic
My very own neopets work, for the times, contests, whatever. xD
That's it for now, but I'm also thinking of moving the neo graphics here. xD
Stay tuned, for I promise this page will be the most active! xD
xD As you know (read above), I'm trying to win the Neopet's Story Competition.
This is my most recent entry, please read and tell me whatcha think!! ^^
(*References on the story below.)
A deep chill ran down Amira's spine. This was definitely not the senator she used to know. The Aisha thought quickly, and blinked rapidly. Amira had a plan...
She was on the verge of tears, which was good for her idea. Unable to resist any longer, Amira released an outburst that she was sure anyone nearby would be able to hear, in case her plan should go wrong.
"Barca!" Her eyes swam with tears. "What happened to you? Was this some cruel trick this whole time I knew you?" Tears flooded her face, and Vyssa turned to her in surprise. The Aisha quickly pretended to struggle, and nudged Vyssa during it. Vyssa's eyes widened for a second, but quickly made them dull. Amira felt a moment of excitement, knowing her sister knew what she was trying to do and going to help go through it. She didn't know it, but she was experiencing a bit of her childhood where they agreed with everything, not knowing anything but pleasure with each other. This was all but five seconds.
Barca let out a cold gail of laughter. "You think that I was doing everything for you, advising you on everything, for your gain? You thought you knew me?" Her face scrunched into a face of cruel glee. Suddenly, her face became stone again, eyes mere slits. "No one knows me. I barely know myself. I do not know why I'm doing this. Only that I know it is what myself says so."
Amira gulped, making sure that everyone could see her discomfort. Barca only twitched; she seemed to feel nothing. She thrashed harder, and purposely kicked Vyssa to do so too. The Usul fell over, but then pretended to fight back. This time, they got a reaction.
"Meercas!" She barked, her sharp, commanding voice almost echoing in the big room. "Separate them. I need no further delay. And don't forget to take care of this one." She grabbed Sankara so forcefully she let out a horrified shriek. She struggled as well, and screamed.
"Let me go, you traitor!" She tried twisting around and biting and scratching, but the Acara had a firm grip. She pushed her onto the floor, and Amira could see she was really terrified, especially when the once dignified Aisha broke into a sob.
I'll let her play her part, thought Amira. She will be convincing, and then we'll let her escape with us.
First Heermeedjet went to Sankara to tie her up. Meerouladen came over to seperate the sisters, although they weren't struggling much anymore, just staring at Barca. All except for Amira, who was quickly untying the bejeweled gold bracelet she had hidden in her sleeve in hopes she could save something of her royal status, in case she didn't make it. Now she had a much better use of it.
When he came next to her, she checked she was holding on tight, and showed Meerouladen the delicate bracelet before he could touch them. She saw, out of the corner of her eye, the greedy stare again, and hid it in her sleeve. She whispered, ever so softly,
"There's more of it if we are all freed, safely." She rustled around, to cover the whisper.
He seemed to agree. He pushed them apart, for Barca, but not too far apart. Afterward, he turned and whisper in Heermeedjet's ears. They both grinned greedily. They proceeded to stand close behind the three hostages.
Meanwhile, the Acara examined her royal dagger, with Sakhmet's royal crest engraved in it.
"Shame all of you have to die. I thought that was quite a show, hm?" She laughed ruthlessly. She smirked, malice in her eyes. "Well, better kill you quick, no screaming now." She advanced on them, and despite what she said, Sankara released an ear-splitting scream, for she was not in with the plan, and was terrified out of her wits.
"Quiet, fool!" Barca yelled, inraged, and proceeded to her first. While distracted, Meerouladen slipped a fine thief's dagger into Amira's outstretched paw, and she began to work quickly, cutting through her tight binds.
Vyssa became increasingly excited, and moved closer, and Amira untied her with nimble hands. Soon, she thought. Soon we'll be free.
"You wench!" The Acara was still confronting the whimpering Aisha. Barca's face was a contortion of fury. "I shall kill you first; you imcompetent fool!" She held up the dagger, and Sankara nearly fainted.
"Not so fast, Barca." Barca turned, surprised and completely unguarded. Speechless for a moment, Sankara took the chance and grabbed for the dagger. By now, Barca was completely stunned.
"It's over." Amira's cold gaze matched her fury, and she raised the knife...
It's kinda long, but hopefully it'll make it in! ^.^
*Oh, and here's some reference, if you're completely confused. ^^'
OO Uh.... updated later. ^^;
Needless to say, I have many many works in progress. These are just a few, I hope you like them! Please post some feedback on my blog, and wish me luck in entering the Times! ^^
-Selena (darigan peophin) Beauty (new Title* oO)
-Cari (red xweetok) The Beginning
-Tumble (gikerok) (Title*)
* Please help me with the titles! Post your ideas on the blog. Everything is appreciated! ^^
OMG READ THESE!! xD
These are stories from the Neo Story Contest. My favorites of course, u can have ur own, but I really think the ones I like are really good. xD Check 'em out! ^^
To go to the most recent contest, go here: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml
My Favorites~ ^^
Contests: (updated weekly)
121: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml?issue=121
122: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml?issue=122
136: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml?issue=136
146: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml?issue=146
359: http://www.neopets.com/art/storytell.phtml?issue=359
~Kiwi <33